Writers Jam

An orange (or an onion)

by Ananya
245
10 months ago
The One That Got Away

A poem I hold in my hands

Like an orange (or an onion)

I can't say

What do I know of analogies and metaphors!

As for the orange (or the onion)

I hand it over to you

To prod/ to peel/ to slice

To do with it whatever you like.

Half-way through the process

Of peeling layer by layer

The textured skin, a map of sorts

As the fruit (or the vegetable)

Starts to unravel in your careful hands

Starts to come undone at the seams

And you notice a prick

And the eventual welling of tears in your eyes

Sorry I gave you the onion

The pungent wretch of a thing

The orange, in its sweet, citrusy fragrance

Bustling with bottled sunlight

And tangy-sweet whispers of the earth's generous bounty

I reserved for someone else

Who might just toss it carelessly away (Like it doesn't mean a thing)

In search of a better fruit (or a vegetable)

Like I said

I know nothing of analogies anyway.

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Anonymous
this is written so cleverly. harsh truths gift wrapped in a teasing tone: > Who might just toss it carelessly away (Like it doesn’t mean a thing) > In search of a better fruit (or a vegetable) god i love when poems do this
Reply 10 months ago
sid
"And tangy-sweet whispers of the earth’s generous bounty".. Lord almighty!!! This is astonishing. I love how this very line bridges between entities dwelling in the poem, so effortlessly. Beautifully written
Reply 10 months ago
Asima Firdous
This is so profound
Reply 10 months ago
nav
good god!!!!!
Reply 10 months ago